July 19, 2006
ROCKY ROAD TO WAIKIKI …
I ran my favorite off-road trail today, an hour over rocky and steep terrain — the woods quiet, the air close, brooding, hot. The rivers silent and swift. And it struck me that the kind of focus it takes to negotiate these trails at any speed at all — without breaking an ankle and ending the season right there — is the same state of mind I need to reach if I want to experience that writing in “the zone” sensation.
If you focus too hard on any one particular rock – or writing ‘rule’ – your feet will hit the next rock before your eyes can even register it, or your brain assess the hazard, or the best landing aspect. You have to be “in the now” in the most Zen of ways – with part of your mind constantly on the end-goal, almost subconsciously assessing the rest of the trail ahead, and just trusting your neurological reactions and reflexes to do the rest. And your body has to be fluid, moving easily to accommodate the roll of a rock, the slip of gravel. Because if you’re tense, or think too hard, or lose that Zen focus for an instant – the moment is broken and you will stumble.
And like being in the writing zone, time seems stretched, suspended. When you stop, you almost have to blink and figure which reality you’re in.
Or am I just plain weird? Okay, don’t answer that one
And what does this all have to do with Waikiki anyway?
You will note the glimpse of one of the Hawaiian flowers on my shorts. I bought these shorts with a secret dream to run the Honolulu Marathon – a dream I’ve had for a long, long time, for a number of reasons — and if all goes according to plan this year, and barring further injury or acts of God, I will be running up Diamond Head come December … and along the famous shores of Waikiki at sunrise…
… and just maybe I’ll spot my December book on a shelf in Honolulu ![]()











Toni Anderson Says:
A trip to Hawaii sounds wonderful–I’m not sure I’d be running though!!!!
I know exactly what you mean about the zone–during writing that is. Running for me is just trying to pump out one more breath before I crash
meretta Says:
Love the analogy between running and writing, Loreth! Perfect!
And so pleased you’re following that Honolulu dream. RUN, LORETH, RUN!!!!
Loreth Says:
LOL Meretta — that always makes me think of that line from Forrest Gump — “Run, Forrest, run!!”. I put off watching that movie for so many years — and when I finally saw it, I had to watch it twice. One of my absolute favorties. Love the soundtrack, too
meretta Says:
Glad that I jog good memories for you. tee hee. Jog. Get it?
And actually, it’s supposed to. I do it to the kids all the t
ime but they haven’t seen the movie so they don’t get it. I loved Tom Hanks in that. He’ll always be Forrest in my mind.